Give feedback on my custom (GIGA meets Bluestone meets PKF)

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Give feedback on my custom (GIGA meets Bluestone meets PKF)

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Hi folks - I've been working hard on a script, for a SHIP custom video tentatively titled Priestess Azure. I would characterize it as a mix of GIGA, Bluestone, and PKF. Here is a synopsis:
Wealthy, beautiful teenager, Mackenzie Phillips, takes herself seriously as a student of the exclusive, all-girls boarding school, Ionia Prep, committing herself to its mission: to become a strong and independent woman in a man’s world. One evening, while snapping post-workout selfies, a mysterious voice calls Mackenzie to her true vocation: to become Priestess Azure, a soldier in the millennia-old war to preserve the Female underpinnings of reality from Male encroachment. Donning the relics she once viewed as nothing more than a school uniform, she is teleported to the laboratory of Doctor Deimos, a quantum computer scientist on the opposite side of that war. Sparks fly, as her magic confronts his science — as her adolescent naivete confronts his careful planning!
And you can read the script here!
http://bit.ly/priestess_azure

I am so eager for your feedback — good or bad!
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Re: Give feedback on my custom (GIGA meets Bluestone meets P

Post by xj900uk »

Sounds interesting. What did you envisage the heroine/Prriestess wearing?
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Thanks. Magical schoolgirl uniform. Might not be what folks want to see, but I’m going for a Sailor Moon feel. Thoughts?
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Re: Give feedback on my custom (GIGA meets Bluestone meets P

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THink I know the sort you mean. Sweet Pea from Sucker punch like?
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Re: Give feedback on my custom (GIGA meets Bluestone meets P

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Yes, basically. Open to feedback.
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