Natasha custom?

[ranger87]

I can commit $100 in October for my 2 primary requested elements:

1) 1-hand strangle where the villain lifts her off the ground by her neck. She struggles, grasping at his hand, and kicking her feet, until she finally passes out. Her hands drop to her side, and her feet go limp.

2) After getting beat down, for there to be a long, drawn out bit of Supernova crawling across the floor. Shots from various angles, but lots of ass shots. Maybe the villain lifts up her skirt and comments on her attractive body, to humiliate her.

Depending on how September goes for me, I may be able to contribute more.

[Bluestone]

I can commit $100 in October for my 2 primary requested elements:

1) 1-hand strangle where the villain lifts her off the ground by her neck. She struggles, grasping at his hand, and kicking her feet, until she finally passes out. Her hands drop to her side, and her feet go limp.

2) After getting beat down, for there to be a long, drawn out bit of Supernova crawling across the floor. Shots from various angles, but lots of ass shots. Maybe the villain lifts up her skirt and comments on her attractive body, to humiliate her.

Depending on how September goes for me, I may be able to contribute more.

We can do the crawling, but we won't be doing the lifting of the skirt and the humiliating dialogue.

Blue

[ranger87]

I can commit $100 in October for my 2 primary requested elements:

1) 1-hand strangle where the villain lifts her off the ground by her neck. She struggles, grasping at his hand, and kicking her feet, until she finally passes out. Her hands drop to her side, and her feet go limp.

2) After getting beat down, for there to be a long, drawn out bit of Supernova crawling across the floor. Shots from various angles, but lots of ass shots. Maybe the villain lifts up her skirt and comments on her attractive body, to humiliate her.

Depending on how September goes for me, I may be able to contribute more.

We can do the crawling, but we won't be doing the lifting of the skirt and the humiliating dialogue.

Blue

Makes sense. I'm still in.

[Super heroine lover]

Update !

Super heroine lover ; $400.00 Rough chloro as supernova , ripped hose as supernova, strangled with cape against pole as supernova, Falling face down and rolling around moaning a lot as supernova .

cs71; $700.00 Business attire pantyhose heels off during rough small chloro [different setting then bed or table ] she's groggy comes to a little and re- apply cloth until she's fully out . No black gloves worn by villain 2nd small cloth chloro as supernova in fausta position . No black gloves but latex surgical gloves during chloro from villain . Similar dialogue from Emma G's scene . Double debooting with longer foot closeups before she's carried off. Eye checks on both eyes after both chloros. Unconscious Natasha post rough chloro/cradle carry in civies with heels still off gets set on that same stretcher being used in 19 with more leg/foot closeups and another eye check . Them i'm seeing a supernova transformation once she awakes . Upskirt views in civies .

msw762; $400.00 Extended two handed manual strangle with protruding tongue .

Richpartist ; $200.00 For ots carry with butt patt , Ko butt dart or gas as supernova .

Redgunner ; $500.00 Long extended cradle carry in civilian guise with short sleeve blouse . A final pick up and short cradle carry similar to the last scene in Blackbird cry of victory with Natasha in Supernova guise . when she is rendered unconscious for the last time she would be picked up and cradle carried for a short while and then flipped up over into an ots carry . she would then be carried away ots, maybe we could see her carried for ten or twenty yards and out the door . With the butt pat. Want to see Natasha's hands slip slowly away from the villains wrist and arm fall limply away as she passes out after rough chloro in civies, similar to Danica being chloroed in vigilante justice.

xj900uk ; $200.00 civies along with high heels and a sexy business suite ensamble. Red star dust as pepper spray in her face to blind and weaken her .

Dr. Manhatten ; $150.00 Throat chop for now but will add more if he can have a throat cut death or fatal blow to the throat.

Markmarr ; $200.00 For a chop to the throat while dressed in civilian clothes and she staggers back falls to her knees clutching her throat and finally falls to the ground and clutching her throat still thrashes her legs around until [ for someone else to finish this .]

Totallibertarianism ; $100.00 M vs F painful garotte strangle death.

Squidd82 ; $100.00 donation

ranger87 ; $ 100.00 Hand strangle where the villain lifts her off the ground by her neck . She struggles grasping at his hand and kicking her feet until she finally passes out . Her hands drop to her side and her feet go limp. After getting beat down for there to be long drawn out Supernova crawling across the floor .

Ok $3,050.00 and BINGO !!

[Redgunner]

Well done super heroine lover you drove the Natasha custom along brilliantly can't wait for October to see our girl in action! Let's all start saving our shekels to hopefully fund a red krystle custom in the new year! Love to see a rough storyline for the Natasha custom when you have it blue!

[markmarr]

well done everyone

[Super heroine lover]

Well thanks ! She's worth all the hard work and can't wait to see the script . A thanks to everyone who stepped up !!

[Bluestone]

Great work! Okay, I'll get right to work on the script!

Blue

[Bluestone]

Okay, guys, you gave me quite a task, but I've boiled down all of the elements into a plot outline (not a script yet). If everyone agrees that their elements are where they're supposed to be, I will put this plot outline into script form.

Natasha Custom - “Supernova 21: Trapped” - Plot Outline

Plot Outline: Natasha, dressed in glasses, business attire (skirt suit), short sleeve blouse, pantyhose and high heels is escorted into a room by an armed guard. Xander turns around and engages her in conversation, but it soon becomes apparent that she is Supernova in disguise and that this is also a trap. Still in civies, she removes her jacket and glasses, knocks down the guard, and seizes Xander by the lapels, lifting him into the air.
Then, Xander pulls out a pepper spray can and sprays red star dust into her face to blind and weaken her. She staggers back. The guard recovers and starts to beat on her, ending with a throat chop which causes her to stagger back, fall to her knees clutching her throat, and the guard kicks her in the face, dropping her to the floor, with her legs thrashing about.
Xander slips on surgical gloves, kneels behind her, lifts her into a seated position, and slaps a small chloro rag over her lower face as she struggles wildly. Her heels fall off her flailing feet.
There are upskirt views during her struggles. She becomes groggy and the cloth is removed, then she comes to a little and the cloth is re- applied until she's fully out. Her hands slip slowly away from his wrist and her arms fall limply away as she passes out. Xander performs checks on both eyes. There is a body pan with extended leg and foot views. Then, the guard lifts her into an extended cradle carry.
Then, her eyes snap open, and she pounds the guard, forcing him to drop her. She knocks him down, then using super speed transforms into Supernova.
Xander calmly presses a device and red light floods the room, both blinding and weakening her. The guard recovers and he and Xander double team her, beating her mercilessly, including face and body blows and a throat chop.
Finally, the guard hand strangles her with both hands, lifting her off the floor by her neck. She struggles grasping at his hand and kicking her feet, her tongue protruding as he crushes her throat, until she finally passes out . Her hands drop to her side and her feet go limp. She’s tossed unconscious to the floor, and the two men get ready to finish her.
As she recovers consciousness they kick her while she’s down. Her hose is now showing runs from the beating. She is then pulled to her feet by her cape, and strangled with it (against a pole if one’s available). When she’s almost done, she is tossed face down to the floor and rolls around moaning in pain. Finally, recognizing that she’s beaten, she does a long, drawn out attempt to crawl away across the floor.

Extreme Ending:
Xander pulls her back onto her knees and painfully garrotes her to death. She dies with a death stare and her body is panned.

Peril Ending:
Xander, still wearing gloves, pulls her back onto her knees and roughly chloroforms her again from behind with a small cloth in fausta position There is similar dialogue from Emma G's scene in "Wondra: Payback". After she passes out, he checks both eyes. There is a double de-booting with long foot closeups. Body pan. Then, the guard picks her up into a short cradle carry (similar to the last scene in Blackbird: Cry of Victory), then she is flipped up and over into an ots carry. There is a butt pat, then she is carried away ots for about ten yards (if studio space allows) and out the door.

End

Let me know if I've covered everything.

Blue

[cs71]

Blue
All looks good but i did add on during another contribution to set her on stretcher you used in other vids after shes cradle carried post chloro in civies with extended foot and leg closeups-(some upskirt views if possible). Then her eyes snap open and transform into Supernova. Is that ok?

[Super heroine lover]

Wow looks good to me can't wait !!

[Redgunner]

Hi blue by extended cradle carry I meant a classic cradle carry where she's carried a longer distance than usual. Wouldn't like her to open her eyes during the carry, I'm with cs71, would like her carried to a table as in 19 and restrained there before transformation

[ranger87]

Looks great, over all!

I know you are already jumping through hoops on this. But is it possible to get an alternate take of the two-hand lift-strangle, where her tongue DOESN'T protrude? Even if it's included as an alternate clip or something? The protruding tongue just isn't my thing. But I'm pretty handy with editing, and can edit in the alternate take in my own personal copy, if you are willing to supply an alternate take.

I understand if it's not an option. These group customs can be great, but one of the issues is that you are bound to get some things that you don't like, because of how many requests and contributors there are.

[jhsnuff]

Okay, guys, you gave me quite a task, but I've boiled down all of the elements into a plot outline (not a script yet). If everyone agrees that their elements are where they're supposed to be, I will put this plot outline into script form.

That's pretty amazing -- fittig in all the requests. You definitely Da Man, dawg!

[Richpartist]

My knockout dart to her butt OR knock out gas to the face isnt quite in there.My share just went down to $100