That was a neat one, Max! While I am not too fond of dream scenarios, due to the inherent lack of finality, what with all of it not being "real", it was nice interplay between the two actresses during the dream section. The waking up part also worked well, with the alarm clock and both ladies playing it a little drowsy (if that is the correct word).
My primary focus was obviously on the headshot. Although I found it a little abrupt, especially with no death throes or moans of any kind (a little more shock/fear from Diane would have also been sexy), the execution of it was acceptable and I did like Diane's expression of pain as she went down. I am not going to lie: a major reason for my purchasing this video was the picture of her stare, the two dead eyes rolled upwards, as if they were looking at the new third one. It is one of the best stares I have seen from your films so far. The only way in which I personally think her expression could be improved, would be if it it were to feature her tongue slightly protruding. But that is just me.
Overall, a neat, well done video, that I would recommend in particular to navel lovers, although strangling and headshot fans also get their due. I am looking forward to seeing you produce more wicked films, Max.
Apropos, Diane's stating that she is bored of Orsi playing with her bellybutton made her much more sympathetic to me than was probably intended
