Re: Melody Sky Fan Club!
Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2016 9:05 am
If I may, I’d like to expand on the above and describe the actual coup de grace. Here’s how I’ve always wanted to see it done.
After a grueling one-sided beat-down, the powerful heroine has been defeated. She’s on her knees and elbows at the villain’s feet. She’s too weak to get up. The villain, for his part, is frustrated and somewhat disappointed. He expected more out of the most powerful of all superheroines. He pulls her to her knees by the hair. She paws weakly at his powerful arms. Then grabbing two fists full the front of her costume, the villain yanks her to her feet. He’s now looking at the fear in her eyes. She’d fall to the ground in a heap if he released his grip.
This once mighty and arrogant heroine is now softly sobbing, begging for her life, she knows he is going to kill her. The villain is disappointed in her. Not that she was defeated; No, he expected to defeat her. He is disappointed because she’s begging and sniveling for her life. He slaps her to try to bring her back to defiance. It only makes her snuffle more. Another slap or two and she’s dangling in his grasp blubbering on. Her supplicating enrages him. He changes his grasp from her costume to either side of her head. He informs her of his disappointment. Her eyes fill with fear; She knows she’s a goner.
The villain looks into her eyes and sees fear. There’s a drop of blood leaking from her nostril, a bit more from the corner of her mouth. He licks the blood from her cheek and chin. Then to her shock, the villain kisses her. The kiss isn’t one of passion. The villain is simply forcing her to taste her own blood again. A shutter of fear runs through her body. She’s never bled in battle before. She’s never been defeated before. She knows it’s over. "No, please, no..." she says in little more than a whisper.
Suddenly and violently, he snaps her neck. She’s now dead, but he holds her up for a moment, looking into her vacant eyes. Then drops her in a heap on the ground. He stares at her for just a moment, then drags her up so she is sitting on her keister. He holds her head his thigh and poses with his conquered foe. He looks up either to his gods or his planet or whatever. He drinks in his victory. He thinks of all the other heroines he now has to destroy.
Finally, he tosses her lifeless body over his shoulder and leaves with his prize.
Later the same villain could go on to kill other heroines. Other heroines which are not as powerful as SuperNova Prime. He would however be impressed and comment to them how although weaker than SuperNova Prime they remain defiant until the end. Never sobbing, never begging him for their lives. The villain could comment to them on how impressed he is. Of course, he'd still destroy them.
After a grueling one-sided beat-down, the powerful heroine has been defeated. She’s on her knees and elbows at the villain’s feet. She’s too weak to get up. The villain, for his part, is frustrated and somewhat disappointed. He expected more out of the most powerful of all superheroines. He pulls her to her knees by the hair. She paws weakly at his powerful arms. Then grabbing two fists full the front of her costume, the villain yanks her to her feet. He’s now looking at the fear in her eyes. She’d fall to the ground in a heap if he released his grip.
This once mighty and arrogant heroine is now softly sobbing, begging for her life, she knows he is going to kill her. The villain is disappointed in her. Not that she was defeated; No, he expected to defeat her. He is disappointed because she’s begging and sniveling for her life. He slaps her to try to bring her back to defiance. It only makes her snuffle more. Another slap or two and she’s dangling in his grasp blubbering on. Her supplicating enrages him. He changes his grasp from her costume to either side of her head. He informs her of his disappointment. Her eyes fill with fear; She knows she’s a goner.
The villain looks into her eyes and sees fear. There’s a drop of blood leaking from her nostril, a bit more from the corner of her mouth. He licks the blood from her cheek and chin. Then to her shock, the villain kisses her. The kiss isn’t one of passion. The villain is simply forcing her to taste her own blood again. A shutter of fear runs through her body. She’s never bled in battle before. She’s never been defeated before. She knows it’s over. "No, please, no..." she says in little more than a whisper.
Suddenly and violently, he snaps her neck. She’s now dead, but he holds her up for a moment, looking into her vacant eyes. Then drops her in a heap on the ground. He stares at her for just a moment, then drags her up so she is sitting on her keister. He holds her head his thigh and poses with his conquered foe. He looks up either to his gods or his planet or whatever. He drinks in his victory. He thinks of all the other heroines he now has to destroy.
Finally, he tosses her lifeless body over his shoulder and leaves with his prize.
Later the same villain could go on to kill other heroines. Other heroines which are not as powerful as SuperNova Prime. He would however be impressed and comment to them how although weaker than SuperNova Prime they remain defiant until the end. Never sobbing, never begging him for their lives. The villain could comment to them on how impressed he is. Of course, he'd still destroy them.