Chet3488 wrote:Love the chokehold. I also like the many "views" you use to illustrate it. My only suggestion would be to have Scarlet's left hand desperately reaching for a weapon of some kind. A weapon which would free her and save her from certain capture, possible death... but alas the weapon is just out of reach.
I find the unnatural bending of the body here to be somewhat erotic given my admiration for the complexity of the human form. As to your point about the weapon, I can appreciate the implications of salvation being outside of arms reach, but I'm not sure it fits with the scene here given the heroine. Scarlet would never use a conventional weapon and even if she were to grab hold of something with her left hand, the awkward positioning would make it ineffective. She was pretty much doomed from the start. Since I've already modeled the scene, I'll render an image for you of
Arrow reaching for an arrow to see how I feel about the weapon idea. Those images rendered quickly so I should be able to post it tomorrow assuming I don't get pulled into another project.
Chet3488 wrote:Love this image. Don't want to be critical, but you asked for feedback. Personally, I love that your heroine in this video is bloodied. I'm always a fan of the heroine getting bloodied. My only suggestion would be that the bloodied heroine should be wearing more white. Instead of black boots, go with white. Instead of black gloves go with white. Possibly add more white (or silver) into her costume...maybe? I think that would make the blood pop out more, plus then you are also destroying her purity and whatever.
I might also suggest that instead of just blowing her away, perhaps he could be holding her head up by the hair, pressing the gun into her temple... then when she finishes begging for her life; When the fear, and the tears, and the regret all show up in her eyes... BAM!
Love your work.
You never have to apologize for being critical of my work. Given the abstract nature of art, I understand that the opinions of those viewing it will vary immensely due to subjectivity. I'm almost certain that there are people who frequent this forum that detest my work given the graphic nature of it, but I can still respect their opinions. On to the discussion at hand. Your feedback thus far leads me to believe that you enjoy the emotional foreplay of the heroine's mental and physical anguish prior to the climax found in death. I can definitely understand the significance in that build up and the symbolism behind the visual element of the heroine being bloodied, especially against white clothing, but I also know that a reoccurring theme in my work is that of a confident heroine who dominates the fight only to lose it unexpectedly during a lapse in judgement or as the result of an unfair advantage to her opponent. I'm always open to trying out new ideas, but I also know where my preference set lies so it shouldn't surprise you if the
majority of my work focuses on the later of those two concepts. On a side note, one of the main reasons I'm steering away from bloodying the heroine early in my sets is that I'm not terribly proficient with blood work in post so I rely heavily on assets within DAZ Studio to simulate blood. Although there are several shaders and bloody overlays, much of it looks fake when applied to a large area so I tend to avoid them whenever possible. Also, keep in mind that the rendered image is supposed to be a Villain Profile so it's a one-off scene which needs to convey a message. While I would love to render every image for every story that goes through my head, it's not really possible given the time commitment.
Chet3488 wrote:By the way, what are VoD and FN? I'd go there and check out more of your work, but this is the only forum of this nature I participate in.
My apologies for the short hand. VoD stands for Visions of Darkness which (amongst other things) is an online community that focuses on
dark 3D art. While it's not specifically set up as a death-fetish site, the membership there is receptive to everything given how the fetishes there pair up nicely with death. In addition to engaging in thoughtful and meaningful discussions about submitted artwork, I believe that the technical experience of the artists there will be
invaluable to my growth. FN stands for FetNoir which is an active death-fetish forum focusing on the harder elements of the genre. I not only like it for the artist community, but also as a consumer since every death-fetish artist I've even known and appreciated is active on that site and they post a lot of their work there. Check your sensibilities at the door though as you will not need them. Also, for future reference and for forum etiquette, you can edit a post within several hours of posting by clicking on the Edit button. It helps to clean up double and triple posts and makes the thread look a little neater.
I think I've reached my word quota for the night so I'll keep the remainder of this post short. Here are a couple of renders from a custom set I've been working on.
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- Whilst Supernova thinks the figure is reaching for the gun and remains unconcerned, he's actually reaching for the container which contains a large Novanite shard similar to the one in Jailbreak.
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- The battle is about to take a nasty turn for our beloved heroine.
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