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Now Blue,

If you are going to make a competition out of this I am up to the challenge.

I have just put the finishing touches on the last 2 scripts.

I dare say that in my films we will be touching on some firsts for Debbie D.

You will just have to wait to see what those are.

May the best woman win.

Oh..wait. Blue, you are not a woman.

Well then. I guess I win.

Baci

kevin67 wrote:May the best bellystabber win.

Did I hear my name?? Did I win something?!! Do I get to stab Dalila and Debbie in their movies?!! Oh goodie goodie goodie! Thanks Kevin!

Dalila di Capri wrote:
May the best woman win.

Oh..wait. Blue, you are not a woman.

Well then. I guess I win.

Baci

May the best man win.

Oh..wait. Dalila, you are not a man.

Well then. I guess I win.

Baci

Bluestone wrote:

Dalila di Capri wrote:
May the best woman win.

Oh..wait. Blue, you are not a woman.

Well then. I guess I win.

Baci

May the best man win.

Oh..wait. Dalila, you are not a man.

Well then. I guess I win.

Baci

Now Blue,

I know that you are tired because you are in the middle of filming and everything but it does not bode well for your dialogue that you just paraphrase me, change one word, and take credit for the paragraph.

The next thing you know we will be hearing some of those great necro lines we all know and love:

"Ew you shot me in the belly"

"Son of a bitch you just blew my nipple off"

I can't wait to see how you re-work these little gems

If you are going to use already well worn words why not take

"Out Damned Spot" and make a monologue for Debbie out of it.

Seriously I hope you are having fun with your shoot.

I film again tonight for an up coming November release.

Baci

Dalila di Capri wrote: The next thing you know we will be hearing some of those great necro lines we all know and love:

"Ew you shot me in the belly"

"Son of a bitch you just blew my nipple off"

I can't wait to see how you re-work these little gems

Those are two lines I NEVER want to hear in any video production
I'd pass on buying a Suzi/Petra epic that was on sale for 5 bucks if it contained those lines!

Nightposter wrote:

Dalila di Capri wrote: The next thing you know we will be hearing some of those great necro lines we all know and love:

"Ew you shot me in the belly"

"Son of a bitch you just blew my nipple off"

I can't wait to see how you re-work these little gems

Those are two lines I NEVER want to hear in any video production
I'd pass on buying a Suzi/Petra epic that was on sale for 5 bucks if it contained those lines!

I susptected that these horrible lines would prompt a negative reaction.

This is one of the reasons that I write out my scripts in advance as opposed to improvising.

I had fun with the first line in "Vargas Girl". My twisted little gun moll looks down at her wound, and then up at her killer.

She says: "You shot me...and...I LIKED IT". There was no pathetic "Ew"...but rather a juicy little "mmm" implied.

Hopefully that improves the line for you Nightposter.

Baci

Yea, that's ok, but I once saw a video where the actress was belly shot, and the remainder of her death scene was all her "belly aching" (pun intended) about being shot in the belly.
This same producer did stabbing vids with similar great lines....
( and he's still out there )

Nightposter wrote:Yea, that's ok, but I once saw a video where the actress was belly shot, and the remainder of her death scene was all her "belly aching" (pun intended) about being shot in the belly.
This same producer did stabbing vids with similar great lines....
( and he's still out there )

I am not sure it is always the producers idea. I remember several videos I edited for Ruemorgue and a couple early ones I did for PKF (Charlie's Revenge 1 and 2).... and they specifically had to have dialogue along those lines as it was an essential part of the clients fetish for a custom video.

Even our beloved Rodzilla like to hear variations of the line: "please don't machine-gun me", which I would never deny him that pleasure in one of his customs if asked.

Well, I guess the producer is to blame for taking them, but I suspect individuals who want their fetish acted appreciate it and we producers appreciate the help--financially.

In that "sub-fetish" thread, dialogue can definitely be discussed to greater extend.

Sadly, I find myself passing on 40-50% of the custom scripts I get sent for various reasons --though dialogue has never been a reason.

I rarely script out my personal productions (non-customs), as I enjoy the natural delivery of improvised dialogue in the actors natural way. While that technique can and has failed, I have found that learned dialogue or simply line for shot memorization can create problems...mostly with the connection between the characters. Sometimes there is the effect of the two characters being in their own dialogue bubble. Then again, sometimes it works great.

Now, take a great, seasoned actress like Debbie or Dalila and it seem natural that scripted method or improvisation would work well.

Anyhow, just observation as I wait for a shoot to start. Take care,

JohnM

Many years ago, when I was a kid, I used to go to 42nd Street in New York City to see our favorite-type movies. One of these Hollywood movies I will never forget. I couldn't beleive it when I heard the following. An actress (?) was shot and she said ouch.