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Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:55 pm
by Redgunner
Let's support cs71 and get this done for early Sept. She's gorgeous!!
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2018 10:42 pm
by Bluestone
cs71 wrote:Blue is back so lets get your requests and contributions in so he can schedule Krystal in hopefully early September!
Yes, I am back, but I can't schedule Krystal until we have $3,000 in commitments and payments, because she's a busy girl. If we book her, we have to shoot with her, since she will have given up other paid work to set aside that day for us. So, please spread the word to get the balance of the commitments. We're ready to put this custom together for you all, but we're still short at least $1,250, and more if Krystal does not agree to some elements, or if some contributors renege as has happened in the past.
"Ultrawoman 11: The Origin" was a resounding success, but there are two proposed customs vying for contributors, and that may be slowing things down. Perhaps, the promoters should get together and agree as to which custom project should go ahead first. Then, maybe by the time the first custom project is funded, the contributors to the first one may be ready to contribute to the second one. Just a suggestion, but I think it makes sense. After all, we only shoot once a month.
Blue
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 8:45 am
by xj900uk
I su ggested that whilst youw ere away,Mr Blue. Concentr ate on getting ths one funded and made,then start planning on an other.
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 10:29 am
by Bluestone
Okay then, Super heroine lover has agreed that we should concentrate on this Krystal Red Dark Wondra custom first. So let's start pulling this all together...
Here are the updated elements and corrected total (since there was a $100 error in the previous list):
-Dr Manhattan-Throat chop-$100
-Tiberius-4-6 knife thrusts/bullets onscreen-$200
-xj900uk-otk boots-$100
-CS71-business attire, pantyhose, heels off during rough small cloth chloro (different setting than bed or table), she's groggy comes to a little and re-apply cloth until she's fully out. No black gloves worn by villain. -2nd small cloth chloro as Dark Wondra in fausta position. No black gloves, but latex surgical gloves, during chloro from villain. Similar dialogue from Emma G's scene.- double debooting with longer foot closeups before she's carried off - eyechecks on both eyes after both chloros-$500 total
-Redgunner-long extended cradle carry-$250
-vcsanks-bad guy to stroke tease neck before strangle -painfully strangled her while bound to a chair- exposing neck during the strangle-$300 total
-Svarty-A very slow neck stab into the base of her throat while her neck/shoulders area is exposed, her head stretched back and her saying "Oh god please... not in my throat!" before, and some intense choking/tongue out action during/after the stab-$100
Total so far $1650 (Target - $3,000)
Firstly, let's set a working title. What about "Dark Wondra 4: The Untold Story"?
Story Outline: This will tell the untold origin of Dark Wondra's origin.
Crystal Sparks, dressed in business attire, is escorted into an office and interviewed by a man who says that she's been hired as a project coordinator not just for her academic qualifications, but because of her unique medical history. She is confused. Apparently, she recovered from a terminal illness through the use of an experimental drug that has since been banned. Before she can respond, a Gatekeeper enters and she is attacked and chloroformed. Time passes and she awakens in costume. Her memories have been scrubbed and she is simply told that she is the weapon code-named "Dark Wondra". She resists and has to be restrained, and killed/captured (depending on version). During the fight, she is stabbed and shot several times, but both her body and costume have regenerative powers. She is cradle carried away.
Well? What do you think? We should be able to hang all of the elements on this story framework.
Blue
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 11:21 am
by xj900uk
No t that keen on repeated shooting and stabbing, b ut it might wll be fun if the bad guys keep stqbbing/shooting her and she keeps on bouncing back up seemingl y unhharmed!
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 12:11 pm
by jhsnuff
Can you have a pause between "kills" to make it easuier to edit -- I'd like to make a private version where it looks like each kill is permanent!
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 2:43 pm
by Bluestone
jhsnuff wrote:Can you have a pause between "kills" to make it easuier to edit -- I'd like to make a private version where it looks like each kill is permanent!
I'd like to hear what Tiberius thinks, because he's the one who asked for this element.
By the way, I started a sister thread at the Ultimate Superheroine Forum asking for contributions. Here it is:
https://www.superheroineforum.com/forum ... 20#p155520
Blue
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 3:10 pm
by Svarty
Omg the story sounds just awesome!! :) what about the throat cut that Dr Manhattan suggested? He wrote that he would raise his contribution fot this.
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 3:44 pm
by Redgunner
Hi blue script sounds ace. This is going to be so awesome! My element is the long extended cradle carry. To hopefully get thing moving I will increase my contribution to $300. For this, as I've already written I would like a classic cradle carry with arched neck, eyes closed and mouth open, completely limp in arms. Also a reasonable length I did suggest earlier we could see her delivered to a research centre a short way away. Maybe we could follow the carry along a few corridors or across an outdoors space between building. Anyway I appreciate this has to be fitted within the storyline.thanks blue give me your thoughts on what you can do
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:26 pm
by Bluestone
Redgunner wrote:Hi blue script sounds ace. This is going to be so awesome! My element is the long extended cradle carry. To hopefully get thing moving I will increase my contribution to $300. For this, as I've already written I would like a classic cradle carry with arched neck, eyes closed and mouth open, completely limp in arms. Also a reasonable length I did suggest earlier we could see her delivered to a research centre a short way away. Maybe we could follow the carry along a few corridors or across an outdoors space between building. Anyway I appreciate this has to be fitted within the storyline.thanks blue give me your thoughts on what you can do
Can we do the cradle carry in civilian clothes, i.e. blouse and mini-skirt?
Blue
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 7:03 pm
by Redgunner
Sounds great blue. Could it be a short sleeve blouse or long sleeves rolled up? Always prefer a cradle carry with bare arms. That would be perfect thanks
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 9:06 pm
by Bluestone
Redgunner wrote:Sounds great blue. Could it be a short sleeve blouse or long sleeves rolled up? Always prefer a cradle carry with bare arms. That would be perfect thanks
We'll see what we can do.
Blue
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2018 1:56 am
by Director B
Due to circumstances beyond our control, this custom has been canceled. Blue will give more info soon.
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2018 2:55 am
by Svarty
Oh noes :( bad news
Re: Krystal Red Dark Wondra Custom
Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2018 4:57 am
by xj900uk
What? Oh no! Bgger!!!