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Inner monologue

Posted: Tue May 16, 2023 5:51 pm
by christine
blue sometimes includes how the superheroine or agent is thinking while they are being strangled, like "no this can't be happening." i was thinking how it would be fun if he included a descent into incoherence as they expire, like half words, grunts, and incoherent combinations of sounds.

Re: Inner monologue

Posted: Tue May 16, 2023 7:57 pm
by SSkykingDA
christine wrote: Tue May 16, 2023 5:51 pm blue sometimes includes how the superheroine or agent is thinking while they are being strangled, like "no this can't be happening." i was thinking how it would be fun if he included a descent into incoherence as they expire, like half words, grunts, and incoherent combinations of sounds.
There is no level to which inner voice cannot be sexy! I love the slow transition from arrogance, to denial, protest, questioning, recognition, despair, and finally, acceptance. The idea of it continuing into unfinished and confused thoughts, to end mid-thought has always appealed!